sábado, 1 de junio de 2019

Pre-Writing


 It was the prewriting that I made in a Team with 3 people more, is basically a Brainstorm that you will see below.



Brainstorm Example

Detached house.
It has a small lobby that u can see when u enter to the house yippy yo yippy yey.
it has a corridor where u can see the main rooms beside the entrance  (living/dining/kitchen etc). very big.
has 4 bedrooms.
it has 2 restrooms with a lot of light.
the living room is at the left side of the entrance.
5 frontal windows.
2 storeys?
surrounded by grass?
a hall and at the left side the living room, next to it it has a little dining room.
a lil boy bedroom called Zack, and maybe another child(a girl) maybe they are the same age, maybe twins, then there’s another bedroom, maybe for the big brother or sister, or for the friends when they stay at home, the big bedroom , maybe for the parents is the last one.
The Zack´s room is fully decorated with dinosaurs stuffs next to the bed there is a small night table with a lamp on it, in the wall behind the bed there are a kind of dinosaur painting and a next to it big letters spelling ZACK.
In the right side of the bed there's a window with a brown curtain.
The general colour of the house is cream that gives a certain touch of class to the house.
The house has a lot of decoration ( pictures, flowers, lamps,candles,mirrors, etc.)
If you see from the second floor to the outside, you will see a landscape of the neighbourhood
the laundry it’s located in the first floor and there are two grey washers.
In the bathroom, there are a bath, a bathtub and a slide door shower.
A kitchen with a lot of space and has a storage room inside.
Wooden stairs with a cream color carpet on it and handrails at the top.
Kitchen cabinets
it has a beautiful worktop, made of wood and marble in the middle of the kitchen there is a countertop, on the right side it has the sink, in front of the countertop is the stove , above it is the microwave oven, going left you may find the door where you store the food, then another piece of worktop and the refrigerator
There is a room in the second floor, at the end of the corridor where are kept the children toys.



Reflection

As a reflection, I can say it was easy to do, it was a description about a house to sell it, so making this type of prewriting should be easier than others, because you must look the thing you will describe and write visible things about the object, house, etc. The only hard part maybe is when you discover new words or looking for new vocabulary depending of what are you describing, it will help you to improve your redaction and the application of new words.

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